Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Mackenzie, you have made a very colourful paper chain. Is there any special meaning for this paper chain? Next time you could maybe add a description of why you made this.
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ReplyDeleteYou've made a chain with all different colours and sizes. It looks great. I agree with what Mrs Judkins says. It would be helpful for someone who is reading your blog to know why you made your paper chain because they may not have seen the task on our site.
Mrs Hamilton
A very colourful paper chain, it looks a bit like a crown!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mackenzie, it is great to see you make the paper chain, it was lovely to have you share it in our class meet too. What do you think is the most important way to share God's kingdom?
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